Introduce Argument - 2 Support with Evidence - 2 Transitions – 3 Formal Style – 3 Conclusion - 2
12/20 (75) Daniel - I like that you used some of the documents from class because they help to present the topic. You are also using lots of vocabulary, which helps develop your writing. I was confused, though, since you claim at the beginning that life was better after slavery, but your conclusion makes a different argument that it was "ridiculous" after slavery.
Introduce Argument - 2
ReplyDeleteSupport with Evidence - 2
Transitions – 3
Formal Style – 3
Conclusion - 2
12/20 (75) Daniel - I like that you used some of the documents from class because they help to present the topic. You are also using lots of vocabulary, which helps develop your writing. I was confused, though, since you claim at the beginning that life was better after slavery, but your conclusion makes a different argument that it was "ridiculous" after slavery.